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When I wrote the novel that landed me an agent, The Girl and the Clockwork Cat, it wasn’t an attempt to cash in on a new trend. In fact, when I came up with the idea, I refused to write it because it was a trend. I went on to write the first draft of another novel that I had planned. Throughout that process, the main character for Clockwork Cat pestered me relentlessly, giving me an endless flood of ideas for the book while I tried desperately to cling to the manuscript I was writing.
Eventually she won, but not before I stubbornly finished the first draft of the other book (which needs major editing as a result). From the moment I started writing Clockwork Cat I found myself on a roller coaster ride with the main protagonist dragging me along by my throat. She’s easily the most determined character I’ve ever worked with and not one to take no for an answer. I love working with her, even if it is exhausting as hell. Here’s a small excerpt from the book to give you a glimpse of her.
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The steamcycles rumbled to life and she heard them pulling out of the alley. With fierce will, she managed to stay still until the sound of the engines faded in the distance. Then she scrambled like a startled rabbit, throwing disgruntled cockroaches in all directions in her desperate charge for the open air beyond the edge of the ashbin. One bony elbow smacked into the brick wall and she bit down on her lip to stifle a cry.
Sound is the killer. Silence carries one through the night alive.
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Now I sit back and wonder. I know the book is good, it’s gotten too much attention to be anything less, but is it good enough to make it in the world of big publishing. My agent seems to believe so and I love her for that. Sometimes I wonder if it wouldn’t have sold already if I had just slipped a vampire in there somewhere like Cassandra Clare’s Infernal Devices books. (I actually love these books. I already have book three pre-ordered and it doesn’t come out until March of next year.) If I had made the steampunk element more of a character in itself as it is in the fantastic Leviathan trilogy by Scott Westerfeld rather than a more subtle environmental aspect à la The Difference Engine, would it be on shelves already?
In the end, I always come to the same conclusion. I wrote the book the way it needed to be written. It wasn’t supposed to be about steampunk or magic or the supernatural. It’s a story about a young woman who, despite her lowly origins and the questionable means by which she has learned to survive, discovers that she is capable of great things. It is her story.
Clockwork Cat is the book that got me my agent. I hope it gets me a publisher too, but there are no guarantees. That’s why I’m still writing and editing like a fiend to get more out there.
I guess this is just to say that you should always write the story the way it needs to be written. I think we need to recognize that telling the story that is in us rather than trying to make it conform to, or avoid conforming to, some trend will make that story shine. It will feel authentic, not forced. The passion that we put into it will come through.
In this new age, with all of the small presses popping up, it is much easier to find a home for a good book that crosses genres or doesn’t quite fit the ideals of a specific trend. In the world of big publishing, it can still be a challenge to find a place for such work (though I’m giving it a go anyway). Break the rules of the genres if that’s what your story calls for. Ignore trends and popular gimmicks if they don’t fit your story. Write the book you want to read and enjoy it.
Happy writing!



Neyska! So, I’m not crazy or disorganized, or have ADD. Well, skip that. I thought I was the only one who would start out one way in my blog with the full intention of going in one direction and end up in some other universe entirely at the end of whatever screed I had exhausted. Rather than trying my audience’s (aha!) patience, I re-read my ramblings and you know what? My instincts are good. It’s much more honest if I don’t try to force myself into whatever position I thought I was going to stress. I am not a fiction writer. I either don’t have the talent, which is probably the best bet, the patience, 2nd best bet, am lazy, bingo! and I am 56 and have produced exactly 49 blog posts, with any regularity. So, like zippo on experience. But, I’m having a riot in a good way, meeting all these great people, reading all this wonderful material and getting a peek into wonderfully creative minds, such as yours! Thanks. I will be lurking (not really) and waiting for “The Girl and The Clockwork Cat.” I can’t wait. Your devoted fan, Mary <3
Haha! You are too nice.
I really think that writing what is in you means you do have more fun and, ultimately, so do the people who read it. Your instincts are spot on as far as I’m concerned. Write what you want to write and enjoy the people you meet doing it.
Thanks for the visit Mary!
I’m looking forward to reading …Clockwork Cat as well. =^)
My biggest struggle with my own writing is that I have so much setting and character details in my head that want to get out, along with motivations and themes that organizing it is a struggle. After organizing it is (more or less) tackled, deciding which storylines to include is a nightmare. I have so many colliding and competing sub-plots and story arcs, and very few of them actually scream out “I’m the main plot!” because they all seem so darn important.
I almost get paralyzed by indecision having so many options, and just as soon as I conquer that, I’ll get saddled with the fear (or is it prescient awareness?) that I will have to re-write massive portions of my work (yet again) in order to incorporate the many plot twists that emerge “on the fly” as the characters tell me more about the story.
Not that re-writing is bad in any way… Sadly, I do it all the time… but then I feel like I’m forever re-writing old stuff and never actually getting to the new stuff, which piles up inside my head in greater detail than I can possibly type it out without once again getting distracted by the mire of inconsistencies and the constant lure of word-smithing.
My biggest fear in all of this is that by the time my brilliant ideas are finally committed to (digital) paper and (hopefully) published for the world to see… Someone else will have incorporated most or all of “my” ideas and themes (with or without my knowledge) in their own works of fiction (thereby making them “their” ideas as far as the literary world is concerned), or worse, the ideas will become science fact, making my novel anything but.
For example, I just started reading Neal Stephenson for the first time ever, beginning with Snow Crash. I’m amazed at how many of “his” ideas for how people would someday interact using three-dimensional, customizable, digital “avatars” in the online “Metaverse” were years (if not decades) ahead of his time. I’m sure they seemed like pure fantasy when the work was published, yet now they are nothing more than a quaint fact-of-life for anyone who’s ever played WoW (or more appropriately) Second Life.
As our favorite element Leeloo said to Corbin, “HALP! PLAEAESE… HAALP!”
Don’t let it stress you out. You really have to just write what is in you. If you worry about it becoming obsolete or someone else having the same ideas, you will never complete anything.
As you go along, you will get better at refining things and sorting out ideas that work for the book you’re writing and ideas that might be better saved for another book or a sequel. You will also get better at identifying which details add value and which are best left to the mind of your reader.
It still stresses me out sometimes that I simply can’t write everything in my head down as fast as I would like to, but the great thing is that you get faster and better every time you do it, so the rewriting you have to do becomes less and less as you improve. Just keep writing.
Thanks for the encouragement, Nik. I doubled-down and licensed Scrivener recently (I used it during the last NaNoWriMo – I find it easier to use than trying to keep a Word doc (my draft in progress) and OneNote (all my project notes, character bios, etc.) in-sync. Plus, it does author-oriented formatting that Word could only dream of.
(Also, I still dabble with creating my own “author’s editor” program on the side, and getting intimate with the competition can only help make my product that much better!
I’ve heard a lot about Scrivener. It sounds like a great tool, but I’ve been using Word for so long I’m afraid it would take me too long to adapt.
“I think we need to recognize that telling the story that is in us rather than trying to make it conform to, or avoid conforming to, some trend will make that story shine.”
Yes, absolutely. Beautifully said.
From the time I first started writing seriously (as opposed to doodling around) I’ve had well intentioned people advise me that I “need to write about_______”(insert latest trend.) if I want to see a bestseller. What I tried to explain without kicking and hair-pulling, is that writing isn’t about filling in the blanks and adding random ingredients. It’s about writing with truth and passion–our own brand of truth and passion. And often enough that means listening to the story your characters intend to tell in the way they want to tell it.
Ahh. I love talking to writers who understand that the characters have a story to tell.
That is truly how I see it. If we try and force it to fill some blanks, it just won’t be the same story and we’ll lose what makes it great.
Thanks for the great comment.
Writing the story you “have” to write is the only way the end product will ring true and have meaning. THOSE are the stories that change lives and start trends. The satisfaction comes from caring about your readers, not the latest trends. Trends pass, but readers will remember your story forever if it comes from a place of passion and truth. In my humble opinion, of course.
I like your humble opinion and I quite agree with it.
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